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vendredi 18 mars 2011

Haiku - Could this be paradise?

Draft 1

Why travel the world
when all you need is here
and you didn't even know it?

(Anybody recognize the title?)

1 commentaires:

DD-QA a dit...

This could even pass as an interesting response to the story we read in class.

Again, something tells me the Cut to the Bone / Word choice could be tweaked a bit. Have a look and let me know what you think.