The Acer Netbook comes in 5 stylish colours depending on your tastes: light blue, red, black, grey and white!
Costco had a really great permanant deal on this laptop: 279,99$. What a great buy!!
This laptop is really great for my age (14) because it does the trick. I don't really need a big expensive laptop because I have no obligation for that. If I were an adult working constantly on my laptop all day for work, I would probably want a bigger unit.
Just a small impediment: I am a very original person, so I love the fact that the Netbook comes in different colours, so I own a light blue one. The only thing is that the laptop only has Windows 7 Starter, which means that you can't change the desktop back ground. You can purchase a full version of Windows 7 for 90$.
It is also very easy to earn enough money for this laptop for it is only 279,99$, which is what we all like to call a great deal.
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Alicia,
Good review. The text is clear, your sentences flow well and the point is clear.
A few things to consider:
1) You mention that the laptop is great for your age, but aside from knowing you personally, the reader has no way to know who is speaking.
2) Try to spice up some of the language. Remember that this is a more or less formal-sounding document. Instead of saying "The only thing is..." you could say " one main drawback (or disadvantage) is... Read through it as if it was a real review and make it sound as professional as you can.
Let me know if you need a hand.
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