1.
The seasons go on and on
but among all,
winter is pure beauty.
2.
Hockey and rink are one.
Hockey, rink and winter
are one.
3.
Hot chocolate in hand
we slay the monster of winter
but we don't try too hard.
4.
Shakespear wrote in thy frosty air,
breath of he curls behore thy.
A sprinkle of winter falls
in hair of he.
5.
It was evening all afternoon.
It snowed and it will snow.
But for now that snow
is no more.
mardi 19 avril 2011
5 Ways to Look at Winter
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Alicia,
Nicely done. You did a nice job applying some of the structures to your own version of this poem.
One thing to point out:
The fourth stanza is really hard to follow. I think it's the word "he" that is throwing me off. Have a look and see what you can do to clear that one up.
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